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[|Glitter Gra]  =The saddest moment in time = It's been six years now,Iwas only six at the time and yet I remeber like it was yesterday.I woke up bright and early for it pet day at my favourite school day.I got dressed,had breakfast and went out to pick out flowers ,we had lillie and roses for my sand saucer that year my favourite.Once I had my flowers I went inside and my Mum was wating there Romeo isn't coming,Iv called and called him but he's still not coming. not evan when you shock the cat food? We spent the rest of the morning looking for him but Romeo was not to be found! It's time to go'' Mum said. But we still had not found RomeoI started to panic.It will be OK mabey he has just gone flatting today which in our house meant he just gone for a wonder.I didn't want to leave with out him but Mum was putting everything in the car. No! I screamed I wont leave with out him Mum I just wont! I ended up not going to pet day with him and it wasn't the end of the world really.It had been two weeks now and Romeo still hadn't come home.After two months we gave up, we had put up lost cat posters and asked around the people we knew if anybody had seen him,nobody had.Someone had seen dead a cat like him not that that made anything better.I miss him so much he was the best cat anyone could have he was this huge grey fluffy cat who liked anyone and everyone even if he didn't know them he could come and per like a car.He could never be replaced he was so wonderful! by Ale A lovely story Ale and very sad. I think you need to spend more time at the editing stage as there are heaps of spelling errors. Don't forget to check punctuation too.

    


